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January 11, 2018 / barton smock

rare disorders in the very young (ii)

in a nightmare

(praying over
his father
to highlight
the size
of the first
computer)

he disproves

god

(son) who breathes

for a snake
made of milk

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  1. danielpaulmarshall / Jan 11 2018 9:37 pm

    The turns in your poems are so unexpected: for “praying…” “to highlight the size of the first computer”, which “disproves god” (with a small g) is just mind boggling.

    • barton smock / Jan 11 2018 9:44 pm

      thanks man. the saying. the notice.

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