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October 26, 2015 / barton smock

rescue

sister
she yanked
her finger
from the dream
of a dollhouse
telescope
and went on
to preach

(Cain is a girl’s name)

death
it wants
your son
it wants
the patience
violence
has

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  1. moonskittles / Oct 26 2015 8:33 pm
    dmason's avatar

    ugh… very great use of allusion.. powerful and tragic.

    • barton smock / Oct 26 2015 8:38 pm
      barton smock's avatar

      deeply appreciate the seeing and the saying so.

      • moonskittles / Oct 26 2015 8:46 pm
        dmason's avatar

        you are welcome!

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